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Good evening!  Here is the finale of Desdemona's spare story.  I hope you enjoy!

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joandsarah
Mar. 30th, 2014 01:35 am (UTC)
Aww such a lovely chapter. I had wondered how things would go with Shadow and the whole werwolf thing. Good idea to only have the transformation on the full moon, which makes much more sense than Maxis's every night change.
silverbelle1220
Mar. 30th, 2014 11:21 pm (UTC)
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Thanks! Yeah, Shadow and Jimmy worked things out. I was never a fan of EAxis's take on werewolves either, which is why I adapted the canon of the BRRL to fit my needs.
scribal_goddess
Mar. 30th, 2014 03:39 am (UTC)
Aaaawwwwww!
silverbelle1220
Mar. 30th, 2014 11:21 pm (UTC)
:D Glad you liked it!
tatdatcm
Mar. 30th, 2014 05:23 am (UTC)
So glad things worked out for Desi. It's nice to see those recessives back in the family.

I love the song you used to close out the chapter.
silverbelle1220
Mar. 30th, 2014 11:22 pm (UTC)
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Glad you liked what I came up with for Desi. Recessives are pretty awesome, imo.

It really is a great song, and it really seemed to fit Desi quite well.
biglenny
Mar. 31st, 2014 08:00 am (UTC)
Congrats on finishing Desdemona’s story!

[Spoiler (click to open)]Heh, Roxanna should definitely be in her daughters dream to assure her that none of the events in the past were her fault. I find it one of the most awesome moments in the story because it shows how tight-knit the Dorans are in times of trouble. :D


I’m so glad to see that Desdemona and Jimmy finally married despite their initial difficulties after the restaurant date. I also love the cabin’s new look because it seems to reflect the new her after her dream with Roxanna. Their kids are adorable as well.


That was a really sweet ending!
silverbelle1220
Mar. 31st, 2014 05:42 pm (UTC)
Thanks!
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Yeah, Desi needed a little kick in the rear, and her mom was just the person to do it. I love how close the Dorans are too, considering the fact that they’re often spread out across the multi-verse.

Desi and Jimmy are quite good for each other, even if they did start out on the wrong foot. The issue of how to deal with Jimmy’s lycanthropy had to be dealt with, and because both of them are stubborn it wasn’t going to go well. I had a lot of fun redecorating the cabin, because I knew that Desi would be all “this rustic thing isn’t working for me,” and Jimmy would go along with whatever she wanted, within reason (hence there still being some more neutral tones instead of all wild colors). Their kids are great. Since you didn’t get to do much more than see them, I’ll have some more on their personalities in the BTS I’m working on.

:D Glad you liked the chapter.
rosefyre
Apr. 28th, 2014 08:14 pm (UTC)
So I'm super late on that whole commenting thing...oops?

[Comment]Yay for Desdemona getting a kick in the pants! Because, dude, she needed it.

Why am I not surprised at the arguments? At least they eventually work it out!

It's nice to see a pregnancy scare that ends up not actually being a pregnancy. :P Those aren't exactly common in sims stories.

I can't blame Desdemona for wanting marriage after how screwed up her own parents were. I think Marcus and Roxanna were really too immature to be parents when it happened, and he stayed that immature while she was thrust into being the caretaker. It really is better to wait until you're actually ready.

I like the crack about Baby Girl being impersonal. :P

Yay for cute kidlets! I'm glad they did eventually work it all out, and they have lovely daughters. I'm also glad Desi didn't have a whole brood, because while Lily was totally the type to have four kids, two stepkids, and one adopted kid, Desdemona...is not. Two is a good number.

I hope we do get to see a behind the scenes eventually!
silverbelle1220
May. 2nd, 2014 11:34 pm (UTC)
Late comment is still greater than no comment.

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Desdemona really did need a kick in the rear. She needed to start living her life and not dwelling on the past.

The arguing made sense, but they were always going to work it out in the end. This is a Sims story, after all.

Heh, the pregnancy scare came from a conversation I had with someone (it might have been you actually) about how throwing up almost always = baby in the Sims world. So I decided to throw a twist into things.

For as edgy as Desdemona is, I knew that watching how things played out between her parents would make her a traditionalist in some areas. Marcus not aging certainly played into that, but Roxanna was able to step up to the plate when she was basically the same age so in theory he could have to. Yes, it is best to wait until you’re ready, which Desdemona and Jimmy were at the point they had their first.

Yeah, Baby Girl is not really a unique name at all.

Their kids were so freaking cute, and I liked how they were so similar yet different. Desi didn’t strike me as a brood of kids mom either, and two is a good number. Someone to play with but not unmanageable for the parental units.

I’m working on the BTS, but sorting through pictures and organizing my thoughts is taking longer than I planned. Hopefully soon!

Thanks for commenting!
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